Stupendous

A pregnant moon suspended blushes with bliss



Published in my24-page photo/anthology ~CLOUDS MEANDER~ 2020

AP: Honorable Mention 2026, Honorable Mention 2022

Submitted on April 3, 2018 for contest MONOKU PICK A PICTURE WHAT CHA SEE (#3) sponsored by JAMES EDWARD LEE SR  -  RANKED 3RD
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Callus Avatar
April 23, 2018 at 11:20 AM
Very creative, Line....and stupendous, if I may say so:) Would have liked to see it placing higher! Congratulations! // paul
Gauthier Avatar
April 23, 2018 at 12:05 PM
What a wonderful comment, Paul. Lots of good entries. Thank you so much for your lovely visit.
Haight Avatar
April 21, 2018 at 7:33 PM
Nice one, Line. Congratulations on your win. Hugs, Sandra
Gauthier Avatar
April 21, 2018 at 8:54 PM
Thank you, Sandra. Much appreciated.
Dietrich Avatar
April 21, 2018 at 5:19 PM
I am surprised I ever missed this one since i Love short poems so much. Line, this is one of the best in my opinion. Congrats for your win. This is so clever.
Gauthier Avatar
April 21, 2018 at 5:28 PM
Thank you, Andrea. There were so many good entries.
Cunningham Avatar
April 21, 2018 at 10:05 AM
Congratulations on your win Line, Tom.
Gauthier Avatar
April 21, 2018 at 10:41 AM
Thank you, Tom. Much appreciated.
Walker Avatar
April 21, 2018 at 9:11 AM
Line, a lovely poem to read. Congratulations on your placement. Have a happy Saturday. ~ Sonia
Gauthier Avatar
April 21, 2018 at 10:41 AM
Thank you, Sonia. Much appreciated.
Andresen Avatar
April 21, 2018 at 6:17 AM
- Congratulations on your winning poem, Line :) - Great written :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Gauthier Avatar
April 21, 2018 at 7:03 AM
Thank you, Sunshine. Much appreciated.
Gonzales Avatar
April 21, 2018 at 1:57 AM
An impressive imagery of a pregnant moon blushing :) Congratulations Line!
Gauthier Avatar
April 21, 2018 at 7:03 AM
Thanks, Elaine. Much appreciated.
Murray Avatar
April 21, 2018 at 1:14 AM
So nice Line. This appeals to the midwife in me. Congratulations.
Gauthier Avatar
April 21, 2018 at 7:03 AM
Thank you for your wonderful visit and comment, Jean.
Gentry Avatar
April 21, 2018 at 12:53 AM
Back to congratulate! Beautiful!
Gauthier Avatar
April 21, 2018 at 7:03 AM
Thank you so much, Susan.
Gentry Avatar
April 8, 2018 at 7:28 PM
Great imagery! Perfect for the pic.. I like this.
Gauthier Avatar
April 8, 2018 at 8:41 PM
Thank you, Susan. Much appreciated.
Krutsinger Avatar
April 4, 2018 at 2:34 AM
Good luck in the contest, I love the word pregnant used in another lovely context.
Gauthier Avatar
April 4, 2018 at 6:28 AM
Thank you, Caren. Very appreciated.
Leiser Avatar
April 3, 2018 at 10:59 PM
Love your imagery in your outstanding Monoku, Line! Good luck in the contest :)
Gauthier Avatar
April 3, 2018 at 11:16 PM
Thank you for your much appreciated visit and comment, Laura.
Rodrigues Avatar
April 3, 2018 at 10:24 PM
A lovely sight!
Gauthier Avatar
April 3, 2018 at 10:58 PM
Thank you, Kim. Much appreciated.
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April 3, 2018 at 9:49 PM
Fab-u-lous! Good luck in the contest :) xomo!
Gauthier Avatar
April 3, 2018 at 9:52 PM
Thank you so much, Maureen. Most appreciated visit and comment.
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