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Stuntman

Instead of asking Me to move my bike, you hid It in the locked shed When you saw me looking for It, you didn’t say a word It’s been 10 years now But you still pull the same stunts With books, my laptop, Turning off my internet – What kind of parent does this? 7/13/11 Received 3rd place in "Bag of Tricks" contest

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Date: 8/2/2011 4:51:00 PM
Cute write. The last line makes the poem, of course. Glad that it won! xoxo Robert.
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Date: 7/25/2011 10:33:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved win in Linda-Marie's "Bag Of Tricks" contest Susan. Love, Carol
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Date: 7/24/2011 4:51:00 AM
CONGRATULATIONS . . .really amazing . .and i'm very proud that i've been sharing the placement with you,. . .a great sophisticated poet. . .*-* junjun >>> ~~~ smile ~~~
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Date: 7/24/2011 4:28:00 AM
hey Susan congrats on your win, Davi
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Date: 7/24/2011 12:18:00 AM
Nice job girl! Congrats!
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Date: 7/23/2011 8:33:00 PM
Interesting..The parent who thinks that they are teaching you some kind of lesson..Congrats on your win..Sara
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Date: 7/23/2011 2:38:00 PM
I haven't been on Soup much in the last couple of days and have a ton of congrats messages to send - and not much time to send them in today! Forgive hasty message -many congrats on your wins : )
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Date: 7/23/2011 2:11:00 PM
My congratulations on the third place win in the contest of Linda,susan
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Date: 7/23/2011 2:03:00 PM
Congrats Susan on your success in my contest and thankxx for your support always... this was a delight and treasured piece luv...
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Date: 7/23/2011 12:25:00 PM
Yes, I remember this one. It was quite unique and showed something about your childhood. I think we can learn a few things about how NOT to be from certain things our parents did. And now MY kids have probably learned a LOT on how not to be.haha. Congrats on the winners' circle, Susan. I'm very happy to have met you on this website!
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Date: 7/15/2011 2:52:00 PM
[sigh] just perhaps a lonely person who can't stand anything or one taking your attention from them? BIG HUGS! [you never know?] Light & Love
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