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Stunning When my soul screamed, the birds in the hedges grew silent. ————————

Copyright © | Year Posted 2025




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Date: 2/21/2025 12:37:00 PM
Sally, that is one powerful scream! Usually the birds sense or portend something, but you've really made a statement with this. While there is a lot to scream about these days, I would just say that this touched my heart and makes me feel a sense of heightened euphoria for the idea of a connection with a beautiful person such as you. BTW, gotta love poetry that's like this...simple and thought provoking!!!
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Date: 2/19/2025 7:18:00 AM
compelling ~
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Date: 2/18/2025 8:47:00 PM
I like this Sally….well said and powerful! Debx
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Date: 2/18/2025 3:09:00 PM
Hello Sally, i guess the birds did not excect you to scream. Hugs. /Darlene//
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Date: 2/18/2025 1:53:00 PM
What a powerful Monoku write. So True... Have a fun/blessed day as you write away..................
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Date: 2/18/2025 5:41:00 AM
That was some scream Sally. No doubt the worms trembled too. Nice mono
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Sally Eslinger
Date: 2/18/2025 9:51:00 AM
Tom, that screaming greatly caused by the home & world CHAOS & pain being caused by Pres Trupusk…. Thank you for commenting. Always appreciated. sally
Date: 2/18/2025 5:33:00 AM
- Sensitive, Sally :) - hugs
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