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Stunning

Stunning When my soul screamed, the birds in the hedges grew silent. ————————

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Duke Beaufort

Date: 2/21/2025 12:37:00 PM

Sally, that is one powerful scream! Usually the birds sense or portend something, but you've really made a statement with this. While there is a lot to scream about these days, I would just say that this touched my heart and makes me feel a sense of heightened euphoria for the idea of a connection with a beautiful person such as you. BTW, gotta love poetry that's like this...simple and thought provoking!!!

Line Gauthier

Date: 2/19/2025 7:18:00 AM

compelling ~

Deb M

Date: 2/18/2025 8:47:00 PM

I like this Sally….well said and powerful! Debx

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 2/18/2025 3:09:00 PM

Hello Sally, i guess the birds did not excect you to scream. Hugs. /Darlene//

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 2/18/2025 1:53:00 PM

What a powerful Monoku write. So True... Have a fun/blessed day as you write away..................

Tom Woody

Date: 2/18/2025 5:41:00 AM

That was some scream Sally. No doubt the worms trembled too. Nice mono

Sally Eslinger
Date: 2/18/2025 9:51:00 AM

Tom, that screaming greatly caused by the home & world CHAOS & pain being caused by Pres Trupusk…. Thank you for commenting. Always appreciated. sally

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 2/18/2025 5:33:00 AM

- Sensitive, Sally :) - hugs