Stunning

Stunning


When my soul screamed, the birds in the hedges grew silent.


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Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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Beaufort Avatar
February 21, 2025 at 12:37 PM
Sally, that is one powerful scream! Usually the birds sense or portend something, but you've really made a statement with this. While there is a lot to scream about these days, I would just say that this touched my heart and makes me feel a sense of heightened euphoria for the idea of a connection with a beautiful person such as you. BTW, gotta love poetry that's like this...simple and thought provoking!!!
Gauthier Avatar
February 19, 2025 at 7:18 AM
compelling ~
M  Avatar
February 18, 2025 at 8:47 PM
I like this Sally….well said and powerful! Debx
De Beaulieu Avatar
February 18, 2025 at 3:09 PM
Hello Sally, i guess the birds did not excect you to scream. Hugs. /Darlene//
Goldsmith Avatar
February 18, 2025 at 1:53 PM
What a powerful Monoku write. So True... Have a fun/blessed day as you write away..................
Andresen Avatar
February 18, 2025 at 5:33 AM
- Sensitive, Sally :) - hugs
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