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Stumbling Upon a Pond

I spotted two frogs jump from a green lily-pad, but sadly they drowned. I pulled them out...while the others croaked and left the rippling, gloomy pound. Entered in Sydney LeeAnn's contest, " Lily-Pads & Frogs " Written by Andrew Crisci

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 5/7/2012 8:44:00 AM
Very nice approach to the contest theme here.Best wishes to you.
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Date: 5/7/2012 1:28:00 AM
Andrew just great, good luck..David
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Date: 5/6/2012 11:23:00 PM
Well Andrew, at least the other frogs wete singing at their funeral :)...or maybe they were jumping on somekinda dare and misjudged their abilities?lol Best wishes in the contest hun, its late here...sorry ;) big hugs, love deb
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