Stumbling Blindly

She was again in my life 
disguising herself as my much missed best friend
Wanting her so blindly
I let her break my heart again

   Together we spent most of our day
and a few intimate nights
becoming closer just as we were before
Without any warning she turned away again . . .
she decided she doesn't want to know me any more

   Now that I am to move on
Tell me, where do I go from here 
and how do I start
When all that I can do
is to stumble through . . .
the shattered pieces of my broken heart

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012



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Date: 10/18/2012 10:37:00 PM
.."shattered pieces of a broken heart scattered everywhere, putting remedies to it, Oneself will say is the best thing to do to "Self", beat it, that is fair!".. Sad piece.. I know how it feels.. Nicely done David!!
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Date: 10/18/2012 6:10:00 PM
This is a great poem, but sad. it takes a long time for a broken heart to heal. Sometimes things happen for the best. Time takes care of everything. Thanks for sharing this with us. Lucilla
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Date: 10/18/2012 2:47:00 PM
Expressive and emotive work..Loosing someone that you love can be painful..Sara
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David Kendrick
Date: 10/18/2012 2:51:00 PM
well you know my work. its just what comes out, not a big deal really. just have to get her out of my head
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