Study For a New Lamp 1990

A date rams gate tiny merry line ..., time to a ramble in a gait to date twelve times
twenty-four to half-past eight makes pivotal mime.
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Stanton Avatar
November 6, 2009 at 3:37 AM
ouch! i guess i wrote that so fast-i forgot it was mine! sorry.
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November 6, 2009 at 3:34 AM
"A date rams gate tiny merry line ..., time to a ramble in a gait to date twelve times twenty-four to half-past eight makes pivotal mime." beautiful, thank you tom
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November 6, 2009 at 3:32 AM
calm-it is ok.
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November 6, 2009 at 3:31 AM
knock on the door one wish back two steps turn apparitions hold hands but cannot connect to living flesh annie knows she was cowering in the cubbord when trouble came now she is younger than us all
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November 6, 2009 at 3:17 AM
Very interesting play on words, Thomas. I am intrigued by this write's meaning and its clever rhyme scheme. And thanks for your words on "Disposable Wisdom." That woman used to live next door. In the past two nights her old house has been broken into twice and it's been frightening because our homes are so close together. That's why I've been up all night. Love, Carolyn
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