Stuck In Bitter Dreams

Around me my dreams closed like violet fog/ 
I felt  your presence nearby, and your name I called/ 
I tried to search for you through the thick clouds/ 
but baby, you were nowhere to be found/ 
you were suppose to be near, suppose to be here/ 
when I needed you the most/ 

I tried to scream your name/ 
but my throat just closed/ 
I searched for you everywhere/ 
but baby, you were nowhere around/ 
I fell on my knees on this bitter cold mound/ 
unable to see through this purple haze/ 
I felt your heart beat, and went into a daze/ 
my tears fell to the ground/ 
like a raindrop slipped from the sky/ 

I didn’t know where you went/ 
I couldn’t help but to cry/ 
I never thought I would be alone/ 
I never thought our bond would untie/
I walked and looked around/ 
but you were nowhere to be found/ 
so close but so far/ 
where are you baby, I can’t see in the dark//
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Lammerman Avatar
February 26, 2012 at 12:41 AM
I love this.. How do you get so many comments and views?
Loveless Avatar
March 22, 2012 at 10:25 AM
Thank you so much! (: And um, I'm not really sure, I guess because I always try to read and comment back. I don't think about how, I'm just glad I do! My Poetry Is my soul <3
Hall Mad Poet Avatar
October 27, 2010 at 11:41 AM
Hey What's happening? I need more and i'm still waiting. not fare
Loveless Avatar
March 22, 2012 at 10:24 AM
Whats happening? Um, I don't know, I didn't plan on continuing it. It seemed done at the time lol
Hall Mad Poet Avatar
October 24, 2010 at 2:48 PM
Wow I love this poem. Can I steal it for me favs can I, can I, Please
Loveless Avatar
March 22, 2012 at 10:24 AM
I'd love if you added it to your favs
Sweetheart Avatar
October 22, 2010 at 4:39 PM
A powerful intense write Princess with awesome lines of emotion... enjoyed reading your poetry today with its creative theme.. happy weekend with luv..
Boy Avatar
October 21, 2010 at 3:21 PM
a rockstar of empty dreams' kool lost feelings you pinned in your sweet write. Good luck in searching and making your dreams complete. laterz Princess ;b
Mehta Avatar
October 21, 2010 at 1:10 PM
What a touchy write you have penned so well being stuck in bitter dreams,
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