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Stuck

a hidden tear, a hidden scream. full of fear, yet full of dreams.

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Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 12/17/2009 10:38:00 AM

Tears are the product of strong emotions, Kelsey, including fear and joy. When we hide our tears from the world, no one knows how much we need a helping hand. I hope the only tears you shed will be ones inspired by happiness this holiday season. Very stimulating and thought-provoking work! Love, Carolyn

Heather Hill

Date: 12/14/2009 6:30:00 PM

There have been many times I have felt this way, I love how even a short poem can capture so much emotion and feeling. Thanks for the post, lovely writing!~