Stuck

a hidden tear,
a hidden scream.
full of fear,
yet full of dreams.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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December 17, 2009 at 10:38 AM
Tears are the product of strong emotions, Kelsey, including fear and joy. When we hide our tears from the world, no one knows how much we need a helping hand. I hope the only tears you shed will be ones inspired by happiness this holiday season. Very stimulating and thought-provoking work! Love, Carolyn
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December 14, 2009 at 6:30 PM
There have been many times I have felt this way, I love how even a short poem can capture so much emotion and feeling. Thanks for the post, lovely writing!~
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