Stuck

Wish I could erase
What it is I can not have
instead it lingers
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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August 13, 2008 at 8:48 PM
I think most will relate to times like this. Through faith, we get beyond these moments and learn to move on. Hope you will too. Thanks for sharing your thoughts with us. Karen
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August 13, 2008 at 1:15 PM
Wow. Awesome senryu! I really feel this strong emotion. Heartache does not easily fade away. Love, Shar
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August 13, 2008 at 7:20 AM
I would actually clasify this as a senryu rather than Haiku, but it is in perfect form and clearly expresses the thoughts of the author with a smooth flow and tact. Very well written and thank you for your comments on my poems. Michael
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