Stuck

Wish I could erase What it is I can not have instead it lingers

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Date: 8/13/2008 8:48:00 PM

I think most will relate to times like this. Through faith, we get beyond these moments and learn to move on. Hope you will too. Thanks for sharing your thoughts with us. Karen

Sharon Winter

Date: 8/13/2008 1:15:00 PM

Wow. Awesome senryu! I really feel this strong emotion. Heartache does not easily fade away. Love, Shar

Michael Degenhardt

Date: 8/13/2008 7:20:00 AM

I would actually clasify this as a senryu rather than Haiku, but it is in perfect form and clearly expresses the thoughts of the author with a smooth flow and tact. Very well written and thank you for your comments on my poems. Michael