Stubborness

proton positives...
and neutral core neutrons hold...
negatives captive...

in distant orbit...
that difference stay distant...
and this? core remain...
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November 21, 2018 at 7:58 PM
https://www.bing.com/videos/search?q=Joan+Baez+sings+christmas+carols+on+youtube&view=detail&mid=5D4C01CA2646D410516B5D4C01CA2646D410516B&FORM=VIRE
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November 21, 2018 at 2:02 PM
I'm pretty hard headed myself and I speak from experience when I say that when two hard headed people disagree they are at a stale mate. Nothing gets solved. It's like two rams going head to head and neither will give up. Well Done my friend. God Bless, JB
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November 21, 2018 at 2:15 PM
positives can be as stubborn as the negatives...it's just that 'positives' too often sound to the positive
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