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Strung Over

I’m just an Ain’t Broken watchman, speaking truth until I’m Ungrateful Dead, with a Rorschach sackcloth over my head Dangerously living the Master plan Beware!! Don’t eat the poisonous strange fruit hanging ... the beaten pulp will intoxicate Fill a heart with drunken hate Dr. Manhattan remedy ain’t Strangelove cure changing Joker card rope trumped the ace Spade, see the Comedian laugh at the strung over pain Got the birds of prey condor singing in the rain: Heard that’s how a mob man got made Time, it’s a ticking bomb to Apocalypse Now, but the Silk Spectre don’t black widow veil care Listen to the Nite Owl a-hooting in the nuke air, as the swaying blood harvest is not cut down

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Date: 11/1/2019 6:28:00 AM
You are unique Freddy what I have always loved about you!;)
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Date: 10/31/2019 9:13:00 PM
Wow. This was excellent. Brave, strong, poignant. Ann
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Date: 10/31/2019 7:08:00 PM
My PSoup peeps ... the Rorschach [sack]cloth over my head line is referencing the HBO "Watchmen" series. In this alternate American History X, the Seventh Kalvary (that was Gen. Custer's regiment) are the domestic terrorist version of our KKK. Their "ghost face" is a Rorschach cloth. I get one put over my head before being mob lynched. Now you all know the backstory behind the poem. Ty for your kind comments. Love and peace always.
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Date: 10/31/2019 10:36:00 AM
Cool and crazy (?) imagery - with a Rorschach sackcloth over my head.
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Date: 10/30/2019 10:28:00 AM
Word!
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Date: 10/30/2019 9:31:00 AM
Your poetry man...a unique style all on its own...love it Freddie...all the best my friend...^WW^ :o)
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