Struggle of a Butterfly

Cocooned in safe world so fragile,
The butterfly flutters by,
Nothing in life comes too facile,
Struggle you must, break in to fly,
Kites of success shall sail on high !




Written on 26/5/14
Sponsor- Kelly deschler
Contest- The butterfly flutters by
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Guillermo - Fraser Avatar
June 1, 2014 at 3:59 PM
wow. nice nice :) God bless always.. :)
Watson Avatar
May 27, 2014 at 6:50 AM
A lovely little poem . I wish you luck in the contest .
Dietrich Avatar
May 26, 2014 at 9:26 PM
a nice little quintain. I worked on my butterfuly poem today too. Good luck in the contest.
Wilson Avatar
May 26, 2014 at 4:53 PM
Very beautifully written ! love, Deb
May Avatar
May 26, 2014 at 2:53 PM
Wonderful quintain Dr Upma...Charlie Sheen is an actor and starred in a show called two and a half men...
Chutani Avatar
May 26, 2014 at 12:00 PM
Upma, you put it very well- fragility of life and need to struggle to succeed. Mohan
A. Sharma Avatar
May 26, 2014 at 1:55 PM
Thnx Mohan !
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