Struggle For Beauty and Pleasure

Though the stem is thorny as the road at the end beauteous rose petals hold their head high up up up Written by:Elliott Bowe

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Elliott Bowe The Drunken Poet

Date: 5/30/2012 11:27:00 PM

Thank you all!!!

Bl Devnath

Date: 5/29/2012 1:39:00 PM

Yes, you have got the supper sight here. Thanks for sharing, loved always, bl

Elliott Bowe The Drunken Poet

Date: 5/29/2012 10:55:00 AM

Thank you all,I was inspired by the rose.Though its has a thorny stem beauty still grows. The thorns to me being adversity and pain....

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 5/29/2012 10:35:00 AM

Elliott, up & up... love the look...... thank you for sharing your awesome poem this morning, always :-) LINDA

Carma Sanderson

Date: 5/29/2012 10:30:00 AM

"Great Creativity Elliot, Enjoyed It! Carma"

Cindy Lu

Date: 5/29/2012 7:53:00 AM

great beauty in verse, and nice shape! It shows a dlicate side, with hopes. wonderful that so much is between the lines, what have I been missing not being able to remark on others poets that have so graciously visited me... Have a blessed day, Enjoy! :) Cindy