Strong willed Iyah '

After some interaction twixt the lady above..I gained some insight.? Does it
Dim anything i cherish and love.? She's
A real Aussie battler folks..With her head
Screwed on.' And Lord she seeks recompense.' Just while shes going along
Find out more about her, for she will reach
Out.' Do i still think she is ( adorable.?) Yes without a doubt, she is great with her
Vo-cab..Sharp as a tack..Iyah i still back
Ya...Gurl stay on your track, I'm stilll an Aussie from a way back ya see..Maybe i
Was a little blunt.? But that springs from
What I owe, a great land, that made you and me..I know that you'll look in and read
Of my lines..Come back when you are ready gurl, i've got a dirt map and some
Plans designed.'
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Rolland Avatar
August 27, 2026 at 2:22 PM
moving poetry, enjoyed
Maverick Avatar
August 27, 2026 at 10:55 PM
Hello Yann thank you, i sent you a soup mail a few days ago... All blessings.)
Poet Avatar
August 27, 2026 at 2:15 AM
Joe, your poem has a strong sense of admiration and respect for Iyah, portraying her as a determined and admirable figure. Your description of her as an "Aussie battler" highlights her resilience, and the poem expresses a warm connection.
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August 27, 2026 at 5:29 AM
Well we were in contact just a few Days ago Sotto..No doubt she gets a multitude of attention. Well Earned btw, she is certainly has a Good buisness head extra to her musical prowess i'd say.? I did exoress some considerations i had, and did invite her to come here..Where i am sure she would be most welcome, anyhow she is quite busy so that will be as if and When.. I guess.?)
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