Strong Feelings

Take the
feelings I have
for you and
look at them
a while

Stack them
up or leave
them there or
throw them in
a pile

You could
think of them
as soldier troops
and line them
single file

Or send
them off into
the field and
march them
several miles

You could
even put them
in a plane
and soar them
way up high

Then push
them out without
a chute, falling
from the
sky

But you
will see that
there is nothing
anyone can
do

To change
the fact that
I am filled
with endless
love for you
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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December 11, 2013 at 9:18 AM
ah nice... I LOVE THE WAY YOU EXPRESSED YOUR LOVE THERE
Mc Mills-Cooper Avatar
December 12, 2013 at 12:51 AM
Thank you Ms. Narayadu, this is an oldie, but I still love it. Read more and enjoy and thanks!!! MC
Lamoureux Avatar
August 3, 2013 at 6:40 AM
This was fun! I don't think I will go up in a plane with you*lol*
Mc Mills-Cooper Avatar
August 3, 2013 at 3:51 PM
Ha! Thanks Rick! This too is an oldie, wrote it on the city bus coming back from my recruiter's office somewhere between 1995-1996. This was my view of the Army while still a civilian LOL! MC
Gabriella Avatar
July 18, 2013 at 4:49 PM
This is a truly lovely write! Well written and I love the rhyme! Great job!
Mc Mills-Cooper Avatar
July 19, 2013 at 8:52 AM
Thank you, I'm so glad you like it! This is another old poem, but I've always liked it.
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