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Strong Feelings

Take the feelings I have for you and look at them a while Stack them up or leave them there or throw them in a pile You could think of them as soldier troops and line them single file Or send them off into the field and march them several miles You could even put them in a plane and soar them way up high Then push them out without a chute, falling from the sky But you will see that there is nothing anyone can do To change the fact that I am filled with endless love for you

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 12/11/2013 9:18:00 AM
ah nice... I LOVE THE WAY YOU EXPRESSED YOUR LOVE THERE
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Marquis Mc Mills-Cooper
Date: 12/12/2013 12:51:00 AM
Thank you Ms. Narayadu, this is an oldie, but I still love it. Read more and enjoy and thanks!!! MC
Date: 8/3/2013 6:40:00 AM
This was fun! I don't think I will go up in a plane with you*lol*
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Marquis Mc Mills-Cooper
Date: 8/3/2013 3:51:00 PM
Ha! Thanks Rick! This too is an oldie, wrote it on the city bus coming back from my recruiter's office somewhere between 1995-1996. This was my view of the Army while still a civilian LOL! MC
Date: 7/18/2013 4:49:00 PM
This is a truly lovely write! Well written and I love the rhyme! Great job!
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Marquis Mc Mills-Cooper
Date: 7/19/2013 8:52:00 AM
Thank you, I'm so glad you like it! This is another old poem, but I've always liked it.

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