Strong Feelings

Take the
feelings I have
for you and
look at them
a while

Stack them
up or leave
them there or
throw them in
a pile

You could
think of them
as soldier troops
and line them
single file

Or send
them off into
the field and
march them
several miles

You could
even put them
in a plane
and soar them
way up high

Then push
them out without
a chute, falling
from the
sky

But you
will see that
there is nothing
anyone can
do

To change
the fact that
I am filled
with endless
love for you
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013


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Date: 12/11/2013 9:18:00 AM
ah nice... I LOVE THE WAY YOU EXPRESSED YOUR LOVE THERE
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Marquis Mc Mills-Cooper
Date: 12/12/2013 12:51:00 AM
Thank you Ms. Narayadu, this is an oldie, but I still love it. Read more and enjoy and thanks!!! MC
Date: 8/3/2013 6:40:00 AM
This was fun! I don't think I will go up in a plane with you*lol*
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Marquis Mc Mills-Cooper
Date: 8/3/2013 3:51:00 PM
Ha! Thanks Rick! This too is an oldie, wrote it on the city bus coming back from my recruiter's office somewhere between 1995-1996. This was my view of the Army while still a civilian LOL! MC
Date: 7/18/2013 4:49:00 PM
This is a truly lovely write! Well written and I love the rhyme! Great job!
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Marquis Mc Mills-Cooper
Date: 7/19/2013 8:52:00 AM
Thank you, I'm so glad you like it! This is another old poem, but I've always liked it.
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