Strong As a Hearts Resistance

Stone partitions 
stretching somewhere in the distance
borders beckon cross not here
as strong as a hearts resistance
though intentions are most sincere
cobweb covered disappointments
when trust like ancient ruins turn
Divided by protections wall
closing off and closing in
Defenses unlikely to fall
From distant glance
a palisade of sure protection
beautiful as strength appears
But for all the stones raised round a heart
It alleviates not one of its fears 
It suffices only for the warning
at the calling it's drawing near
I'm coming past these stones you've cast
Additions equation by the year
An unsuspecting intruders disguise 
clothed in the eyes of a lover
Let me in, I'm drawing closer
Like a chisel bent and aimed for demise
Saying unlike stone you do not hold me
Through times when my world falls apart
Love alone is not enough to own me
like the filling of my empty to impart
For only then can my bulwark
endure the crumble
of the wall encasing my heart
Greet me first with morning joy
Toil with me under the sun
Do not release me under the light of the moon
Of burdens light and laughters fun
Maybe someday when faith is stronger
when it's safe to rest and not to lead
I can live a faith without borders
And of these stone partitions be free
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Lamoureux Avatar
February 17, 2014 at 8:01 AM
Good morning and a big hug back to you.
Peterson Avatar
February 15, 2014 at 11:42 PM
The struggles you have are so poignantly expressed in your poetry's embrace. Would there could be something I could say or do that would calm a bit your stormy seas.
Virden Avatar
February 17, 2014 at 3:34 AM
Thank you for offering dear friend. I am struggling but I'm a strong lady. My poetry is a deep release for me. I'm sure it will take a more uplifting tune soon. Blessing to you.
Ellison Avatar
February 11, 2014 at 9:02 PM
WOW!!! A brilliant write my dearest Sarai! I am ALWAYS blown away by the way you write! It is an honour to call you my friend! Loving hugs, sweet Sarai! XOXOX
Virden Avatar
February 17, 2014 at 3:35 AM
Thank you my dear friend, forgive me for losing contact for a bit. Going through some struggles but seeing my way through. I'll reconnect soon. Always loving you!
Lamoureux Avatar
February 10, 2014 at 6:40 AM
When you have a Heart that is so beautiful I can understand why you wish to protect it. If not it would most certainly be stolen. I hope that the thief who does steal it will be worthy of it's beauty.
Virden Avatar
February 17, 2014 at 3:37 AM
How beautifully encouraging. Thank you my dear friend. I'm sure I'll be on the other side of the struggles soon. Your support in invaluable. Hugs
Jones Avatar
February 9, 2014 at 7:02 PM
Wow...impressive and I felt the weight of every stone and the need of the fortress....wonderful poem....
Virden Avatar
February 17, 2014 at 3:39 AM
Sweet Donna, you are a precious friend. Forgive me for my absence on the soup as of late. Navigating through some rough seas at the moment. Hugs
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