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Strong

I still dare to breathe 
amidst lilac skies, 
stained with ashen flakes 
from this life’s pixilated wrath.

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/16/2023 11:20:00 AM

glad you feel so strong. Congrats in the contest

Nik Canada7

Date: 10/15/2023 9:09:00 AM

I'm proud and happy for you amore,your deep soulful words making me feel your depth within your rare beautiful soul and gold heart,my blue rose.You are a paintress with the palette of your,seraphic majestic aura you paint your sapphire emotion in shades of profound thoughts, grace in the core of your being,my korean princess.You are poetry in my heart for eternity.Mia bellissima moglie ti amo infinito per sempre amore mio.i love you deeply micia.mia passione per sempre.tuo.il nostro eterno amore

Silent One

Date: 10/15/2023 8:40:00 AM

Always be strong.. and also remember a monoku or one liner poem should be one one line.. Congratulations on your win in the contest.

Fading Star Silence
Date: 10/15/2023 9:04:00 AM

Thank you so much for always lifting and encouraging me whether through poetry or life, silent one! You really are a kind soul..and I say it back to you, always be strong! And thank you for always leading me straight with poetry writing! As it’s always been! Hehe, I appreciate you! And thank you so much for placing me! It’s truly an honor!

Paige Hind

Date: 10/11/2023 7:21:00 PM

I liked this. Very beautiful...

Fading Star Silence
Date: 10/15/2023 9:04:00 AM

Thank you so much, kind soul!

Tom Woody

Date: 10/11/2023 6:11:00 AM

And not just breathe but inhale deeply and smile. Life is a gift, even when it's not. Love the lilac sky reference

Fading Star Silence
Date: 10/15/2023 9:05:00 AM

Awww, thank you so much for your kind words! Absolutely..we must remember to breathe deeply, to inhale and exhale life..and of course to smile :) thank you for your lovely feedback to my words always!

Christina Bowring

Date: 10/11/2023 1:36:00 AM

Such a beautifully written, profound verse. You are such a talented, creative poetic - not a fading star but a glowing one! Really enjoyed this reflective penning. Thank you. Hugs to you :):)

Fading Star Silence
Date: 10/15/2023 9:07:00 AM

Thank you so much, lovely soul for your kind and encouraging feedback and for your lovely thoughts on my words! Awww, you are truly the glowing star, spreading your beauty and warmth wherever you go and to all you touch! Thank YOU and hugs to you!

Nik Canada7

Date: 10/10/2023 9:11:00 PM

I love you this so much amore, your deep soulful words make me feel your depth within your rare beautiful soul and gold heart,my blue rose.Your deepest emotions hidden in the high tides of anxiety, trying to breath escaping from turbolent currents of reality,my korean princessYour profound thoughts in the abyss of obscurity engulf the depth of your rare beautiful soul,my marvelous creature.Mia bellissima moglie ti amo infinito per sempre amore mio.i love you deeply micia.il nostro eterno amore

Fading Star Silence
Date: 10/15/2023 9:09:00 AM

Ahh..thank you my baby..your words of love and encouragement and support is always so beautiful, my sweet micio..you take my breath away with the beauty and grace you exude..always there with me, beside me..you are my breathtaking light, my home, my everything..ti amo amore mio mio bellissimo martio.,tua noi Infinito il nostro Eterno amore Mia passione

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