Strolls Home Through the Corn

strolls home through the corn 
and sees lights at the windows - -
tackles intruder
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Maverick Avatar
January 28, 2012 at 2:29 PM
I've enjoyed this a lot Jack..! also thank you for the positive comment..
Devnath  Avatar
January 24, 2012 at 8:17 AM
Nice one enjoyed from you. Your wonderful, loved, bl
Dietrich Avatar
January 24, 2012 at 12:02 AM
hahaha, I'm sorry. Maybe it's not meant to be funny. But I am thinking of the picture and how you did this so matter of factly. you are just too cool, jack!! CAll you jack the knife. heehee
Situation Avatar
January 23, 2012 at 7:28 PM
ok die hard
Situation Avatar
January 23, 2012 at 7:28 PM
must have been smaller than you
Amadore Avatar
January 23, 2012 at 5:39 PM
A surprising third line...after very effectively penned, visually perfect first two. Good job!
Devonshire Avatar
January 23, 2012 at 5:34 PM
Ah, he must be braver than I, Jack. Now this is the kind of haiku I really like! Great work -- nice building of suspense. Love, Carolyn
Ball Avatar
January 23, 2012 at 5:32 PM
WoW! Imagine coming home before you're expected to and finding someone there whoo shouldn't be. Scarey stuff. Great job here. God Bless, JB
Kendrick Avatar
January 23, 2012 at 2:35 PM
Great one..Enjoyed reading this on this rainy afternoon..Very excellent surprise at the end..Your presence at my work was uplifting..Sara
Sivey Avatar
January 23, 2012 at 2:14 PM
Haha I love how you approached this poem! Just a little stroll, happily along, then the light on at the windows, and then Bamb...the intruder! Wow, Jack, great transition! I think your poem is quite enjoyable and I thought it fabulous! Awesome Work!!
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