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Written 20th February 2025

Taking a stroll through the undergrowth Back to where you and me pledged our troth To love each other, come rain or snow In the forest that we both love so. It's glorious this time of the year When the wild flowers start to appear And trees are proudly sprouting fresh leaves In a dainty dance upon the breeze. We hold hands as the undergrowth’s rough Which causes walking to become tough Not that we need to have an excuse When we’re free to be out on the loose. Upon the trees birds chirp cheerfully Cheeping in avian harmony Squirrels foraging undergrowth store Nuts they have buried on days before. We spot young bunnies taking first hops The farmers who're preparing their crops In the distant not too faraway Working happily throughout their day. So pleased that we came upon this place To delight in nature's wondrous grace Appreciating scenes such as this That we were all given as a gift.

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Date: 2/20/2025 3:20:00 PM
Wonderful and romantic poem Beryl. In nature with the one you love. Great one
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Date: 2/20/2025 2:16:00 PM
so beautiful and romantic Beryl - nothing like a stroll in the countryside to be at one with nature:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 2/20/2025 1:11:00 PM
I enjoyed reading your wonderful/creative ~ write/story. "Good Luck" if for a contest... Have a fun day writing away..................
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Beryl Edmonds
Date: 2/20/2025 1:32:00 PM
Thank you Paula, this is not for a contest… Have a wonderful poetic day, Beryl
Date: 2/20/2025 10:29:00 AM
Aww Beryl your poem of sweet love touched my heart! Debx
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Date: 2/20/2025 10:18:00 AM
Happy memories Beryl, they are precious, hope you're OK and Alan is on the road to recovery. Greetings from the New Forest. Tom
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Beryl Edmonds
Date: 2/20/2025 1:39:00 PM
Thank you Tom, yes memories are our treasures, to tuck a way and look back on them now and again. Alan is recovering nicely. Greetings sent back to the New Forest for you and yours… Beryl
Date: 2/20/2025 6:21:00 AM
Dear beryl, this is so beautiful, so much to appreciate in your poem here woven in such an elegant and eloquent manner! Sublime rhymes and such descriptive imagery throughout! You always have a very artistic way of weaving poems and this is no exception! I hope you are doing well dear poetic soul! Sending you light today and always
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Beryl Edmonds
Date: 2/20/2025 1:33:00 PM
Thank you so much Ink, I truly appreciate your encouraging comments. Sending light in return… Beryl
Date: 2/20/2025 4:44:00 AM
Lovely memories sister Beryl hope Alan is getting better God bless. xx
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Beryl Edmonds
Date: 2/20/2025 9:24:00 AM
Thank you brother John, sending SoupMail. God bless you too… Sis Beryl
Date: 2/20/2025 4:03:00 AM
It will become a cherished memory in future .Very beautiful.
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Beryl Edmonds
Date: 2/20/2025 9:22:00 AM
Thank you so much Akham, very much appreciated… Beryl

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