Stroll After Fireworks

STROLL AFTER FIREWORKS snowballs in July cleaving to a bush at dark colors whites of eyes 7/4/2017 haiku form

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Chris Green

Date: 7/5/2017 6:54:00 AM

This was beautiful and I can picture this. I love the "snowballs in July", a perfect description.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/5/2017 8:27:00 AM

Thanks, Chris!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/5/2017 12:33:00 AM

this is SO cool, Kim. Wow!! and a happy belated Fireworks day to you!!

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/5/2017 8:31:00 AM

Happy 4th to you also, one day later ;) Thanks!

Winged Warrior

Date: 7/4/2017 6:47:00 PM

An explosive Haiku Kim...god bless and happy 4th...^WW^

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/4/2017 8:13:00 PM

Thanks, WW! Same to you, Friend!