stroke of summer



wings whispering, lithe
in bold hues, purple, gold, blue
faded songs, pulsing

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Daniel Henry Rodgers

May 28, 2024 at 8:42 AM

Dear Gina, Your haiku is a mesmerizing snapshot of nature's beauty. The imagery of wings whispering in vibrant hues evokes a sense of wonder and tranquility. Each word carries a weight of emotion, creating a wonderful picture in just a few lines. This is quite an exquisite piece. - Blessings, My Friend, Daniel