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Stripping the Dream

dreaming of bright lights the novice actress bares all. . . in strip club neon For the Picture Perfect Haiku #2 Poetry Contest of Skat

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Date: 6/26/2015 10:01:00 PM
Well, she was still on stage...Congrats on a fine win Andrea
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Date: 6/26/2015 7:38:00 AM
Glad to be able to read this lovely haiku again, Andrea! It has once more served you well...Congratulations! // paul
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Date: 6/25/2015 7:13:00 PM
Wow, now this is unique Andrea. Congratulations on your win!
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Date: 6/25/2015 10:28:00 AM
Such a different direction !! I like this one !! Congratulations Andrea !!
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Date: 6/25/2015 8:36:00 AM
I like your different approach and social commentary. Congratulations.
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Date: 6/25/2015 1:26:00 AM
Andrea... Congrats, thank you for the entry. The picture is done right! **SKAT**
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Date: 5/16/2015 11:46:00 AM
Andrea, that is deep * Forever ~SKAT~
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Date: 11/4/2014 12:00:00 PM
Novice actress bares all to absorb the bright light in entirety. She does not play Arabian Nights. So wise guys the actress was not silly either. Andrea knows better. xxxxxx LOVE RAJAT
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Date: 10/23/2014 4:42:00 PM
Yep stripping eh?? love phyl
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Date: 10/2/2014 8:17:00 PM
I saw the word stripping, so I walked in because well you know how I add photographs to my poems...so I was thinking...Never mind. I love this Haiku. Sounds like you placed in that contest.
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Date: 8/19/2014 10:29:00 AM
Ok you got me with that last line-- I was not expecting that, even if your title could have been a clue-- nice twist in there, Andrea! Read your comment, thanks for the heads up, sweetie and I still owe you mail, but have to sleep now....I really did enjoy that write of yours though-- I still find it so cool how you are still able to write, whatever the contest or theme may be! hugs to you sweetie!
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Date: 8/11/2014 8:29:00 AM
Congrats on ur winning witty haiku dear Andrea! Brilliant take indeed !
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Date: 8/9/2014 11:20:00 AM
very likely a reality for many. nicely put, Andrea. Mohan
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Date: 8/9/2014 11:05:00 AM
Is it a 'Coincidence' or by 'Design'? You next to me, up and down! Baring in neon? I am a natural guy!! Very clever write, Andrea.
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Date: 8/9/2014 10:01:00 AM
This is so awesome my very dear friend Andrea. Congratulations on your win too. Its my honor sharing this win with u my dearest friend. Thank you so much for informing me about the contest, your sweet advice and d good luck from u:)))) Biggest hugs and cheers! God bless! love much, Leonora
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Date: 8/8/2014 10:18:00 PM
Hmmmm.. nice pen picture, Andrea. congrats
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Date: 8/8/2014 8:40:00 PM
I really liked this one. Image was one I've seen when a younger man. Congrats on the HM..
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Date: 8/8/2014 7:57:00 PM
An interesting take - congrats on your win.
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Date: 8/8/2014 6:47:00 PM
dropping by with my congrats Andrea:-) Hugs jan xx
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Date: 7/31/2014 3:04:00 PM
probable bares all. You stuck to the challenge here. I think it's got probabilities of a winner! Hope you are good. And I do not mean that all poets are egotistical. Mostly just myself, at times. and that's who I was describing in that poem. You, definitely are not that way.
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Date: 7/24/2014 5:32:00 PM
Yes, Andrea, the dream of fame has many roads. This is definitely one of them. Sad but true. Well written, my friend.... Robert.
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Date: 7/24/2014 7:20:00 AM
Wishing you the best in the contest Andrea. I enjoyed reading. Have a wonderful day. Love, Carol
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Date: 7/24/2014 5:52:00 AM
Very creative! and sad too. Kudos to you for this gem.
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Date: 7/23/2014 7:39:00 AM
Unfortunately for many this is a probable outcome.. Great piece sweet Andrea! Hugs.. Arlene
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Date: 7/22/2014 7:05:00 AM
An illusive light in the darkness. May we all see the true light. Peace. :)
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