Stripped Down



"Stripped Down"

Stripped down
the external shed,
snakes aren’t what you think

stripped down 
the external shed,
skins hung on a beam 

overhead,
hanging souls 
and their fangs

penetrating

Stripped down,
you hear me now?
Stripped down 

inside 
outside,
upside down

Stripped down,
what you looking at now?
Reflection 

inside
Light,
outside

power 

(LadyLabyrinth / 2023)
gvlm-llb
"Lux Vitae" -
"Vitae Lux"














homonyms.
shed
beam
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Labyrinth Avatar
December 1, 2023 at 11:01 PM
LUX VITAE.
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December 1, 2023 at 11:05 PM
VITAE LUX.
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December 1, 2023 at 5:13 PM
The Wolf's Pockets.
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December 1, 2023 at 5:13 PM
https://www.poetrysoup.com/poem/the_wolfs_pockets_1158749
Labyrinth Avatar
December 1, 2023 at 5:13 PM
Voluptuous Bullets.
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December 1, 2023 at 5:14 PM
https://www.poetrysoup.com/poem/voluptuous_bullets_1215553
Labyrinth Avatar
December 1, 2023 at 8:32 AM
"And when it happens that you are broken, or betrayed, or left, or hurt, or death brushes near, let yourself sit by an apple tree and listen to the apples falling all around you in heaps, wasting their sweetness. Tell yourself you tasted as many as you could."
Labyrinth Avatar
December 1, 2023 at 8:33 AM
for the apple of my eye. gvlm. Xx
Goldsmith Avatar
December 1, 2023 at 8:26 AM
I enjoyed your "Stripped Down" write/great ending. Guess for may it is take off their masks/"Stripped Down." Hope all is OK with you... Have a blessed/wonderful ~ day/weekend..............
Labyrinth Avatar
December 1, 2023 at 8:33 AM
Thank you.
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December 1, 2023 at 7:43 AM
"Pale"/Robin Guthrie.
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December 1, 2023 at 7:43 AM
https://youtu.be/sY05ZC5CbQY?si=35n5fo7ijD1HKIZd
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