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many waters cannot quench love 

neither can the floods drown it 

song of Solomon 

- Striking Fear Home -

As the winds breathe heavily darkened within fury
Moaning filled with clouds begins speaking 
Through stormy turbulent assaults with waves that kill

A ballad is blown away like feathers from angels wings
Rain falling heavily driven by natures unyielding force 
Trees bend to salute the host's almighty anger 

Hurricane's orchestra romancing chaos turns 
Striking tempest flashing lightening power of creation speaks 
Rumbling voices roaring echoes carried from the  heaven's  

The action and power of love both earthly and heavenly
Crackling forks sparking separating inside an air like music dawns
Floods flow down a neck chain around the mountain's face 

Rushing to an ocean's source where it's kissed by the salt of grace 
Washed in a seabed finding her resting place safe inside an oyster 
Enormous waves sad and monotonous, which eventually dies



A collaborated poem 
Anne-Lise Andresen and Liam Mc Daid 
14.09. 2017
tristich unrhymed 
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Andresen Avatar
September 20, 2017 at 2:45 PM
- Sorry I have not seen you have posted this, dear Liam - Many thanks for beautiful poems and your wonderful cooperation :) - Best wishes love and peace - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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September 20, 2017 at 2:47 PM
- Glad you liked; song of Solomon :)
Bateman Avatar
September 16, 2017 at 4:48 PM
Hello Liam Mate!! I also read and commented earlier on this marvelous write by you and Anne-Lise, when she posted it. Very Excellent Work -- and very powerful imagery. This write is full of poetic grace my very good friend!! A FAVE!! Cheers and Best, Gary
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