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Strike

A sweet glancing blow. Taste of iron, tang of life. Consciousness departs.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 6/18/2014 12:03:00 PM
Don't stop now Drew, keep the haiku coming. I like the epic strike..... SKAT
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Date: 6/17/2014 2:59:00 PM
Many thanks. I hope to post more soon. Its good to know there are people out there reading them.
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Date: 6/17/2014 1:40:00 PM
Thank you for sharing :)
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Date: 6/17/2014 7:00:00 AM
Hi Drew, Welcome to Poetry Soup, you have joined a family of great thinkers who will speak to your heart, encourage you and enjoy your talent I will definitely be among those who will not stop to read your work Hope this journey will lead you to your goal As for your first poem, I love it … welcome to the sweet side of the world Your new PS friend .… R. Roger. C
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