Strife and Saunter

Sons' (graves) crunch afoot;
my retch (rose) on pale marrow.
Late, this sun's dissent.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008



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Date: 1/28/2009 4:41:00 AM
Nice haiku, one of my favorite forms. Great job...Raul
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Date: 12/31/2008 5:05:00 PM
Interesting use of this concise form. Thought provoking. I hope you have a wonderful New Year! Keep on writing. Karen
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