Strife and Saunter

Sons' (graves) crunch afoot;
my retch (rose) on pale marrow.
Late, this sun's dissent.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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January 28, 2009 at 4:41 AM
Nice haiku, one of my favorite forms. Great job...Raul
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December 31, 2008 at 5:05 PM
Interesting use of this concise form. Thought provoking. I hope you have a wonderful New Year! Keep on writing. Karen
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