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Strict Haiku

bees pollinating SPRING'S flowers in splendid bloom: life’s dependencies Entry in the Strict Haiku contest

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/21/2010 9:01:00 AM

Congratulations, Joe. DOn't think I saw this one of yours yet. It's very nice, and hey, your centering worked for me, but I did not have to use that extra slash in the second part! Luv, andrea

Date: 5/18/2010 8:04:00 PM

Joe, I just wanted to drop by and add congratulations on your win in Charles's contest to my other comment. Enjoy your success. Wishing you many more. Karen

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 5/18/2010 12:33:00 PM

Congratulations on your win in Charles's "Strict Haiku" contest Joe. Love, Carol

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 5/18/2010 7:53:00 AM

Congrats Joe on your winning poem in the Strictly Haiku contest ..with this enjoyable write which I knew was a winner first time around reading... enjoy my friend.. with luv from the "Sweetheart"

Carrie Richards

Date: 5/18/2010 7:05:00 AM

Congratulations Joe, terrific haiku....indeed life depends on the bees! Great Job!!

Charles Henderson

Date: 5/17/2010 11:50:00 PM

Congratulations on your awesome 6th place win in my contest!!!!--------Charles

Amy Green

Date: 5/14/2010 5:15:00 PM

Damn good Haiku, Joe.

Date: 5/14/2010 4:01:00 PM

Interesting perspective. Love the spring flowers. Thank you for sharing your poem with us. Good luck in the contest. Karen

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 5/14/2010 3:11:00 PM

Very nicely done, Joe! I love the way you tie the thoughts together in the last line. How true! Love, Carolyn

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 5/14/2010 1:55:00 PM

Great one Joe and this is another fun contest .. my entry is World Series Mania ..to keep with the current modern theme as Charles mentioned... thankxxx ever so much for your sweet rhyming comment on my poetry... it just lightens a girls heart like u will never know... better than going shopping... thankxxx sweetie ..from the "Sweetheart"

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 5/14/2010 1:23:00 PM

well done Joe, enjoyed, and good luck,..p.d.