Strict Haiku

bees pollinating 
SPRING'S flowers in splendid bloom:
life’s dependencies



Entry in the Strict Haiku contest

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Andrea Dietrich

May 21, 2010 at 9:01 AM

Congratulations, Joe. DOn't think I saw this one of yours yet. It's very nice, and hey, your centering worked for me, but I did not have to use that extra slash in the second part! Luv, andrea

May 18, 2010 at 8:04 PM

Joe, I just wanted to drop by and add congratulations on your win in Charles's contest to my other comment. Enjoy your success. Wishing you many more. Karen

Carol Sunshine Brown

May 18, 2010 at 12:33 PM

Congratulations on your win in Charles's "Strict Haiku" contest Joe. Love, Carol

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

May 18, 2010 at 7:53 AM

Congrats Joe on your winning poem in the Strictly Haiku contest ..with this enjoyable write which I knew was a winner first time around reading... enjoy my friend.. with luv from the "Sweetheart"

Carrie Richards

May 18, 2010 at 7:05 AM

Congratulations Joe, terrific haiku....indeed life depends on the bees! Great Job!!

Charles Henderson

May 17, 2010 at 11:50 PM

Congratulations on your awesome 6th place win in my contest!!!!--------Charles

Amy Green

May 14, 2010 at 5:15 PM

Damn good Haiku, Joe.

May 14, 2010 at 4:01 PM

Interesting perspective. Love the spring flowers. Thank you for sharing your poem with us. Good luck in the contest. Karen

Carolyn Devonshire

May 14, 2010 at 3:11 PM

Very nicely done, Joe! I love the way you tie the thoughts together in the last line. How true! Love, Carolyn

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

May 14, 2010 at 1:55 PM

Great one Joe and this is another fun contest .. my entry is World Series Mania ..to keep with the current modern theme as Charles mentioned... thankxxx ever so much for your sweet rhyming comment on my poetry... it just lightens a girls heart like u will never know... better than going shopping... thankxxx sweetie ..from the "Sweetheart"