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Home » Poems » Kim Rodrigues » STRICKEN BY WHOLESALE RAIN

STRICKEN BY WHOLESALE RAIN 

the rush of rain and panic of the chimes - - -
               torrent of brazen Winter
                         the gray skies never die

2/12/2019

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019


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Sheri Fresonke Harper
Date: 2/18/2019 5:14:00 AM
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Very wonderful, tangible imagery, you paint a dramatic picture, enjoyed reading it.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/19/2019 7:14:00 AM
Thank you, Sheri!
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 2/16/2019 4:34:00 PM
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Thanks for reading and considering my work in your contest. Sara
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/19/2019 7:13:00 AM
YW
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Victor Buhagiar
Date: 2/14/2019 5:48:00 AM
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The sun shines here in Malta, but no heat. It's cold. Lovely kimo.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/19/2019 7:13:00 AM
At least some warmth in the sun. Some days just cold and gray. Looks to be another one of those today. Hopefully Spring will be brighter!
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 2/13/2019 8:09:00 PM
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great title for this one!! imaginative and the poem is so descriptive.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/19/2019 7:12:00 AM
Thank you so much, Andrea! xx
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CayCay Jennings
Date: 2/13/2019 11:55:00 AM
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No, they endure. There's a great message here, Kim. All the best ... CayCay
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/19/2019 7:12:00 AM
Thank you, CayCay! xx
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 2/12/2019 6:07:00 PM
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"brazen winter" - you just called winter what she truly is! Nice one.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/12/2019 8:48:00 PM
Thank you, my friend!
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Tom Cunningham
Date: 2/12/2019 3:48:00 PM
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It feels like we'll never see sun and blue sky again and the winter seems to drag on, I can just see those chimes swaying in a frenzy. Tom
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/12/2019 8:48:00 PM
This rain is so crazy!