Stricken By Wholesale Rain

the rush of rain and panic of the chimes - - - torrent of brazen Winter the gray skies never die 2/12/2019

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Sheri Fresonke Harper

Date: 2/18/2019 5:14:00 AM

Very wonderful, tangible imagery, you paint a dramatic picture, enjoyed reading it.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/19/2019 7:14:00 AM

Thank you, Sheri!

Sara Kendrick

Date: 2/16/2019 4:34:00 PM

Thanks for reading and considering my work in your contest. Sara

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/19/2019 7:13:00 AM

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/13/2019 8:09:00 PM

great title for this one!! imaginative and the poem is so descriptive.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/19/2019 7:12:00 AM

Thank you so much, Andrea! xx

CayCay Jennings

Date: 2/13/2019 11:55:00 AM

No, they endure. There's a great message here, Kim. All the best ... CayCay

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/19/2019 7:12:00 AM

Thank you, CayCay! xx

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 2/12/2019 6:07:00 PM

"brazen winter" - you just called winter what she truly is! Nice one.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/12/2019 8:48:00 PM

Thank you, my friend!

Tom Cunningham

Date: 2/12/2019 3:48:00 PM

It feels like we'll never see sun and blue sky again and the winter seems to drag on, I can just see those chimes swaying in a frenzy. Tom

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/12/2019 8:48:00 PM

This rain is so crazy!