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Stricken By Wholesale Rain

the rush of rain and panic of the chimes - - - torrent of brazen Winter the gray skies never die 2/12/2019

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Date: 2/18/2019 5:14:00 AM
Very wonderful, tangible imagery, you paint a dramatic picture, enjoyed reading it.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/19/2019 7:14:00 AM
Thank you, Sheri!
Date: 2/16/2019 4:34:00 PM
Thanks for reading and considering my work in your contest. Sara
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/19/2019 7:13:00 AM
YW
Date: 2/13/2019 8:09:00 PM
great title for this one!! imaginative and the poem is so descriptive.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/19/2019 7:12:00 AM
Thank you so much, Andrea! xx
Date: 2/13/2019 11:55:00 AM
No, they endure. There's a great message here, Kim. All the best ... CayCay
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/19/2019 7:12:00 AM
Thank you, CayCay! xx
Date: 2/12/2019 6:07:00 PM
"brazen winter" - you just called winter what she truly is! Nice one.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/12/2019 8:48:00 PM
Thank you, my friend!
Date: 2/12/2019 3:48:00 PM
It feels like we'll never see sun and blue sky again and the winter seems to drag on, I can just see those chimes swaying in a frenzy. Tom
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/12/2019 8:48:00 PM
This rain is so crazy!

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