Stricken By Wholesale Rain

the rush of rain and panic of the chimes - - -
               torrent of brazen Winter
                         the gray skies never die

2/12/2019
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Harper Avatar
February 18, 2019 at 5:14 AM
Very wonderful, tangible imagery, you paint a dramatic picture, enjoyed reading it.
Rodrigues Avatar
February 19, 2019 at 7:14 AM
Thank you, Sheri!
Kendrick Avatar
February 16, 2019 at 4:34 PM
Thanks for reading and considering my work in your contest. Sara
Rodrigues Avatar
February 19, 2019 at 7:13 AM
YW
Dietrich Avatar
February 13, 2019 at 8:09 PM
great title for this one!! imaginative and the poem is so descriptive.
Rodrigues Avatar
February 19, 2019 at 7:12 AM
Thank you so much, Andrea! xx
Godwin Avatar
February 13, 2019 at 11:55 AM
No, they endure. There's a great message here, Kim. All the best ... CayCay
Rodrigues Avatar
February 19, 2019 at 7:12 AM
Thank you, CayCay! xx
Krutsinger Avatar
February 12, 2019 at 6:07 PM
"brazen winter" - you just called winter what she truly is! Nice one.
Rodrigues Avatar
February 12, 2019 at 8:48 PM
Thank you, my friend!
Cunningham Avatar
February 12, 2019 at 3:48 PM
It feels like we'll never see sun and blue sky again and the winter seems to drag on, I can just see those chimes swaying in a frenzy. Tom
Rodrigues Avatar
February 12, 2019 at 8:48 PM
This rain is so crazy!
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