Stretching Time

I wish I could stretch time, 
balance it out, 
place it back in perfect design, 
trying to manipulate my rhyme,
Letting my creativity flow through my mind, 
Yet my efforts vanish like smoke and that’s fine, 
feeling like I’m god’s attempt 
to achieve perfection, when expectations 
hides behind my eyes, 
You don’t see it, I know, 
I’m just a distraction, 
and I know my reaction goes unseen, 
it’s how it always happens, 
Left on scene,
Our connection ends in a fleeting second, 
Left without a word, a lost attraction,
This misconception is my downfall, 
Wrong direction if you will, 
Everybody’s fool the first impression 
others glean,  
But trust I incorporate my scripts 
still with ease, 
Yeah rebeltease that’s me, 
Still gentle waves of mercy I 
release into the night,
It’s how my sanity speaks, 
And where I find my peace, 
Because the thought of me 
is so brief across your mind, 
In the shadows not even a secret, 
How can you be so mean?
Thrust into the depths into a darkness 
to be haunted, 
Trying to hide from the wraith 
of your gauntlet, 
Leaving me trying to redeem myself,
How do I escape my life on repeat? 
Because you leave me incomplete,
Awaiting that infinite moment 
I cross your mind once again, 
It’s where I begin my end….

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Date: 7/30/2025 12:02:00 PM
I don't believe for one moment the point ever comes when you have nothing left to give, Brenda Lee. Just too much gutsiness there for that...and always will be. With much affection. :) john
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 7/31/2025 3:20:00 AM
John you always could bring a smile to my lips! I truly appreciate that my friend! Maybe I could get you to read me some of your work soon! Thank you John so very much!;)
Date: 2/16/2023 3:01:00 PM
Love how you captured the dating life in this generation….perhaps, “shall” we give up?! Or do we continue until we find that One?!! It’s definitely a different world out here. Absolutely loved this!!!
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 2/16/2023 10:35:00 PM
Ahh G thank you of course much appreciated but the answer to that question is …..I believe we don’t give up that is until we have nothing else left to give!:)
Date: 2/16/2023 1:49:00 PM
No one deserves brutal treatment. True love has no comprehension of bullying. Heartfelt write from a casualty of spiritual and physical warfare, Ms. Chiri? Or a warning for all the lambs being lead to slaughter? ~;o|
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 2/16/2023 10:34:00 PM
Arlo so true but alas it is how the world is today! Thank you so much for your comment and read!;)
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