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Strength and Will

Trying,
crying,
never lying,
are all part of the task.

Seek out counsel,
look for clues,
don't be afraid
to ask.

It's hard at times,
to admit defeat,
or at least accept
you’re wrong,

But in the end,
when things are right,
the pain
doesn't last too long.

Refinement hurts,
the road is tough,
excellence always
up hill.

Big rewards,
the winner's ring,
are for those who 
have strength and will.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018



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Date: 4/21/2019 6:45:00 PM
Oh, that's really good rhyme. And under suitable circumstances certainly true. Late comers don't have that far or long to go though. You'd be a good guardian for the youth as well as a master of words. D. Kay
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Date: 6/15/2018 1:44:00 AM
Something I totally agree with.As well as a very readable poet you’re also a philosopher something dear to my heart.
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Cary Snowden
Date: 6/15/2018 12:04:00 PM
Wow; I am honored to be considered in such esteem. Thank you, Sylvia, for this honorable recognition. You've made my day. Thank you! -Cary
Date: 6/10/2018 1:14:00 AM
"Seek out counsel, look for clues, don't be afraid to ask." - Something I've been working on! Really happy to see that you're posting more. (: Well written. Always, Laura
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Date: 6/10/2018 10:08:00 AM
Thank you for the encouragement, Laura! Asking is a tough one for me and I have to remind myself the only risk to asking is finding an answer. Thanks for the note! -Cary
Date: 6/9/2018 11:02:00 PM
Amen to that! Lovely rhythmic write, enjoyed! xomo
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Cary Snowden
Date: 6/9/2018 11:50:00 PM
Thank you, Maureen! I appreciate the nod. -Cary
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