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Once I had a rule One that would stop me from love That rule is broken

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Date: 11/27/2018 1:48:00 AM
The joy in breaking a rule. Great poem.
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Date: 9/12/2015 9:05:00 AM
Excellent decision!
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Date: 9/10/2015 11:03:00 AM
I agree with everyone else a very deep senryu, and a rule breaker. Good for you to break the rule :~) a 7 and a very good pen. Hugs Eve
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Date: 9/9/2015 8:59:00 AM
that is deep... SKAT
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Date: 9/8/2015 3:02:00 PM
Excellent verse, Gabriel! I am curious as to who drove you to break your own rule! Always, Laura
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Date: 9/8/2015 6:33:00 AM
be a rule breaker! :)
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