Strength

Once I had a rule
One that would stop me from love
That rule is broken
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Kshetrimayum Avatar
November 27, 2018 at 1:48 AM
The joy in breaking a rule. Great poem.
Lamoureux Avatar
September 12, 2015 at 9:05 AM
Excellent decision!
Roper Avatar
September 10, 2015 at 11:03 AM
I agree with everyone else a very deep senryu, and a rule breaker. Good for you to break the rule :~) a 7 and a very good pen. Hugs Eve
A  Avatar
September 9, 2015 at 8:59 AM
that is deep... SKAT
Breidenthal Avatar
September 8, 2015 at 3:02 PM
Excellent verse, Gabriel! I am curious as to who drove you to break your own rule! Always, Laura
Nance Avatar
September 8, 2015 at 6:33 AM
be a rule breaker! :)
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