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STREETS OF SOLITUDE


unsettling
disquieting
   prompts

fevered
  dreams
close to
dance across
  almost nothing

intangible
  immaterial
yet
extensive
 varied

a sense
    of darkness
the
   eternal
feel

of the
 sporadic

    
yet
peace of mind


     talks

walks


alone
with
               my
               thoughts
in quietness

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Date: 12/27/2024 7:18:00 AM
You're not alone anymore. Congrats on walking with the other placers on the Best Poems list.
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Date: 12/18/2024 7:43:00 AM
This is wordplay and brevity at its best. Stay creative! ^__^ JCB
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Date: 12/17/2024 10:26:00 AM
Dear brian, love the wordplay and arrangement of lines and i especially love “yet peace of mind talks walks alone with my thoughts in quietness” that resonates and is soulful, pleasure reading your take on the prompt, thank you for sharing. Congratulations on your win
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Date: 12/5/2024 10:34:00 AM
Hello Brian, it is a beautiful poem. My fav. Enjoy your day my friend. /Darlene/
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