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Curvy like maggots six sleep on bare concrete all wrapped in paper

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 10/26/2024 10:37:00 PM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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Date: 2/24/2016 7:39:00 PM
HELLEN MASIDO, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing, hope to see a new one from you again. LOVE LINDA
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Date: 1/3/2016 10:42:00 PM
HELLEN, enjoyed reading your poem. Hugs **SKAT**
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Date: 5/10/2012 11:01:00 AM
Very good haiku here Hellen.Enjoyed.
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Hellen Masido
Date: 5/11/2012 4:13:00 PM
thanks kash:)

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