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Streams In the Desert

It’s hit or miss, or so it seems: a stroll beside well-watered streams, then all about, a parching drought. Some days, cavorting in the sun; on others, nary see a one, producing doubt when they’ll be out. But when it seems that things are worse, sunlight breaks through, the clouds disperse, and tender verses start to sprout. ————— A Nove Otto, 9 lines, 8 syllables per line, with a rhyme scheme of aabccbddb

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Date: 1/21/2023 12:56:00 PM
just lovely, jeff! i love the idea of "verses start(ing) to sprout!"
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Date: 1/21/2023 12:26:00 AM
Oh, this is awesome! I live in a desert, so I really appreciate this beautiful poem :)
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Jeff Kyser
Date: 1/21/2023 5:12:00 AM
So glad you enjoyed it - thanks for the read and comments!
Date: 1/20/2023 8:06:00 PM
So well written Jeff…..enjoyed this poem! Debx
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Jeff Kyser
Date: 1/21/2023 5:12:00 AM
Thanks, Deb!

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