JC Brul Poet Haiku

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        ~         stream r       
          o                     o
       ~                       l
           ~                    l
       ~   o                    i
        o                            n
             ~                       g  on rocks
        o ~      whispers beats from leaf to leaf~
          ~ o          birch trees hum along
        ~   ~

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Andrea Dietrich June 2, 2025 at 11:45 PM Another great winner. I am bummed that I can't get my shoes to stay how I put them. What's your secret? JC Brul June 3, 2025 at 3:09 AM I compose directly on submit poem area usung my phone.

Len Gasun June 1, 2025 at 7:03 AM Wow! I love the image! Beautiful haiku my dear poet friend. Congratulations on your well-deserved first place win! Thanks a lot for sharing. God bless you and your poetry. Hugs JC Brul June 3, 2025 at 3:11 AM Thank you Len. Your heartwarming feedback uplifts me. Stay sweet. ^___^