Stream and Life

The clearness and the song of stream is gone
When merges in the river
With a load of churned earth

Look at the rivers how they run like life
Through wood and mead, shade and sun, 
Sometimes swift, sometimes slow,

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May 29, 2014
Form: Kimo  (Syllable count 23+23= 46)
Contest:Let's try a little Kimo by Amy Green
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Thirtyseven Avatar
June 2, 2014 at 2:57 AM
A wonderful write, so mellow, sublime.
Horne Avatar
May 29, 2014 at 2:55 PM
lovely write, dr ram
Hamilton Avatar
May 29, 2014 at 5:06 AM
a superb poem Ram gl in contest hugs
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