Strawberry Smiles

There is no match for the strawberry patch
When my girls and I go to pickin!
We look for the big, red luscious delights
And joyfully smile when they come into sight.

“I got one, oh look there are so many!”
But not enough, to say I have plenty.
Come frolick, laugh and pick away
Where strawberry smiles, rule the day.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2024



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Date: 8/7/2024 5:28:00 PM
Hello Tom Valles, i use to go strawberry picking. then I made strawberry jam. I enjoyed to pick strawberries. this will be my fav. Enjoy your evening my friend. /Darlene/
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 8/10/2024 10:51:00 AM
Hello tom Valles, yes strawberries are the best. Oh , i am sure they did not mind. Strawberries are the best when picked from the framer's field. left over strawberries are good to make jam. Yes fun time. enjoy your weekend. my friend. /.Darlene/
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Tom Valles
Date: 8/9/2024 11:31:00 AM
Darlene, strawberries are the best! We used to sneak some from our neighbor's yard when we were little. Fun times.
Date: 4/26/2024 8:37:00 AM
Dear Tom, What a delightful ode to the simple joys in the strawberry patch. I loved how the imagery of plump, red strawberries evokes a sense of abundance and happiness. Your artistry capture the essence of shared moments and the contagious excitement of berry picking. It's a beautiful to cherish life's small pleasures and revel in each moment's sweetness. What a heartwarming piece. - Blessings, Daniel
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Tom Valles
Date: 4/26/2024 2:00:00 PM
Daniel, I appreciate so much your kind comments. Funny how the little things can evoke such strong memories. Blessings to you as well!
Date: 4/26/2024 6:07:00 AM
This delightful poem of yours brought me back in time to light hearted times of picking wild berries with family! Thank you for this! A pleasure to read! :)
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Tom Valles
Date: 4/26/2024 2:04:00 PM
Oh, thank you Laura! My niece sent me a picture of her little girls (all five) whose smiling mouths were covered with strawberries. They inspired the poem almost instantly. Thanks again for taking time to write. Blessings to you!
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