Strawberry Fields

Dreamt he closed his eyes
In field of sweet strawberries
His lips touched freshness

Bursting desire
Eager for the warmth of sun...
Harvested in vain...
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Kendrick Avatar
December 29, 2010 at 3:38 PM
Very descriptive work..Enjoyed..Glad that I chose this one to read this eve..Sara
Mehta Avatar
December 27, 2010 at 5:59 AM
Wonderful pair of haiku with continuous theme with nicde imagery, Iolanda
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