Strategy

The lions’ wait
Seals the fate of
A late straggler

Quickly surround
Without sound they
Expound teamwork

Bellies content
Hunger spent, the
Pride went to sleep
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Dietrich Avatar
August 13, 2011 at 11:57 AM
Good one! ON topic! congratulations.
Kendrick Avatar
August 12, 2011 at 5:12 PM
Congrats on your win..Sara
Freeman Avatar
August 11, 2011 at 10:11 PM
Unique take on the theme, Randy, "Congratulations on your worthy poem's place. Agape, Moses
Dufresne Avatar
August 11, 2011 at 7:36 PM
well done Randy . Congrats to you
Sweetheart Avatar
August 11, 2011 at 7:36 PM
Congrats Randy on your fabulous fourth place win with new form and great poetry luv..
Brown Avatar
August 11, 2011 at 7:05 PM
Congratulations on your well deserved win in Dr. Ram Mehta's "Than-Bauk" contest Randy. Love,Carol
Mehta Avatar
August 11, 2011 at 6:26 PM
Congratulations on the win in my contest, Randy
Mehta Avatar
August 9, 2011 at 7:48 AM
Thanks for the entry, Randy
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