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STRATEGY

4:3:2 letter diminished tristich & integral one word title - Brian Strand ------------------------------ STRATEGY plan won us

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Lenny Gazbowski

Date: 2/21/2025 12:10:00 PM

True!

thriveni c mysore
Date: 2/22/2025 6:43:00 PM

This is a new form I tried for poet Brian Strand. Thank you dear poet for your kind visit. Cheers!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/4/2025 1:13:00 PM

oh I saw this at the blog. Way to go!

thriveni c mysore
Date: 2/4/2025 7:08:00 PM

Thank you dear poet. New learning experiences they are, sometimes difficult too. I am glad you like this, thank you so much.

Sally Eslinger

Date: 2/4/2025 8:18:00 AM

HiTriveni! True. Thothe Us is rarely the All. Only the word Humanity includes all homo sapiens. “Us” & “we” in terms of Society & Culture & Politics (especially now) NEEDS DEFINING. As such this remarkable poem made me a bit tense…the (project 2025 PLAN) plan had an us for it that did not include me & already deeply much hurting some i know. Hmmm

thriveni c mysore
Date: 2/5/2025 12:13:00 AM

In today's world, we have to plan our own lives to live dear poet. Human World is now becoming a group of solitary lives. Thank you for your kind visit and thoughtful words. Thank you very much.

Tom Woody

Date: 2/4/2025 7:05:00 AM

"There's is success in a multitude of counsellors" - a Bible proverb

thriveni c mysore
Date: 2/4/2025 7:10:00 AM

I agree. Thank you for your kind visit dear poet. I wrote this for poet Brian's blog contest. I just had letter counts in mind. I very much like the wisdom of the saying, thank you for the quote. Blessings