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Strangled Dictum

you panted for air as panic pained as the young life in you drained a ghastly gagged youthful life strangled dictum… and relatives chocked with grief as friends shocked with disbelief seeing your destiny you would not reach strangled dictum… a budding jasmine brutally butchered a blameless young life beastly botched a blossoming rose harshly hacked strangled dictum….

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Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 5/6/2014 6:17:00 AM

Congratulations on your poem being featured this week, Allan

Allan Kazembe
Date: 5/7/2014 4:49:00 AM

thanks. I really appreciate

Skat A

Date: 4/11/2014 10:11:00 PM

ALLAN , Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will find much delight, in reading and in time become familiar with your poetry. At this very moment, I will greet you with the same smile, other poets passed when I first join the soup 4 years ago. I wish you the best when it comes to your writings. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you like. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND". Hugs* SKAT

Allan Kazembe
Date: 4/16/2014 12:46:00 PM

thanks for the wonderful comments and the kind gesture that we should be friends, which I will really appreciate to be...I hope we will talk more. Please visit again

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 4/11/2014 2:30:00 PM

- Warm welcome to PoetrySoup,Allan :) - I choose your first nice and well written poem - Nice to meet you :) - Hope you will be satisfied with our "soup family" - we are many .. but has plenty of room for you too- PoetrySoup Rule1: Be kind and keep PoetrySoup a haven. PoetrySoup is a drama free zone(Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours.) Thank you posted your words and thoughts here, I want to come back to read more another day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Allan Kazembe
Date: 4/16/2014 12:48:00 PM

thanks for the welcome...i truly appreciate...and tanks for the wonderful tips...Please come again and read...I will greatly appreciate

John Pen

Date: 4/11/2014 2:25:00 AM

Welcome to Poetry Soup

Allan Kazembe
Date: 4/11/2014 3:39:00 AM

thanks

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 4/10/2014 11:24:00 PM

Hi Allan, wow... this one cuts.. I love it.. ,, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you enjoy the community, as I did when I first join, March 2010. You'll find many friendly poets, who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I want to be the first to invite you on over, to the contest page. I OFFER MY CONTEST, in hopes it inspires you to write another poem. I'm looking forward to following you and your poetry ha-ha a special pair:) here's the link to the contest page. http://www.poetrysoup.com/poetry_contests/ <---~Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@

Allan Kazembe
Date: 4/11/2014 3:41:00 AM

am touched by your encouragement...and can't wait to participate in the contests