Strangers

bring strangers close, when deep you knows , our thoughts do sympathize, closeness strangers ever grows, though words do hypnotise, good friends return, as well they show, enchantment on the rise, onward passion friends of those, beguile with sweetest ties. thank you Mikki Don Johnson
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Johnson Avatar
September 24, 2013 at 1:03 AM
imagination surely flows through the corridors of the mind, words do surely come n flow, to say another rhyme...great poetry babe...
Davis Avatar
September 23, 2013 at 7:23 PM
This is a very clever and unique friendship write. You spoke from the heart and soul. nice job
Cheesman Avatar
October 3, 2012 at 7:03 AM
You do have such a way with words Don...interesting read this - Shaz
Nutter Avatar
September 24, 2012 at 5:00 AM
Like one of the other comments the last sentence caught my attention "begile with the sweetest ties" could be taken two different ways. Able to deceive because of the friendship or charmed by the ties of friendship. Excellent piece makes one think.
Johnson Avatar
September 24, 2012 at 2:25 PM
probably should be "beguile" ...but thats how it is the friend deceiver...thanks Anthony...
Duncan Avatar
September 20, 2012 at 12:45 AM
I like it,,,,, very nice ;}
O'Leary Avatar
September 15, 2012 at 5:40 AM
Very nice... enchanting... Terry
Cavanaugh Avatar
September 14, 2012 at 8:47 PM
Very good poem. I especially like the last line. For I love poems with a double meaning. Beguile meaning either to charm or to deceive. Excellent word play. Bravo!
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September 14, 2012 at 4:45 PM
This is a sweet tie of friendship here Don! I love the grandiosity of this write, full of wonderment and delight!(I didn't mean to rhyme but it seems to work well)! I really enjoyed reading this awesome poem this evening! This shows a kindhearted mind within you Don, you are a sensitive man...I've known this for a long time now however! What a fabulous piece, Great Work!!
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