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Eri proprio tu, E per un attimo ti ho visto accanto a me. Nella mia confusione c'eri tu In mezzo a tutta questa gente indifferente C'eri proprio tu! ... In ogni mia distrazione c'eri tu Tra i rumori intermittenti della pioggia Io ti ho visto qui... Ma adesso... Dove sei? web —

- Stranger In the Darkness -


Thru autumn darkness
Too strange, always when the rain comes
The man in the dark timelessly elegant, 
mysterious and silent
Where does he come from ?
Through a black hole ?
Nobody knows him, remains a stranger
Like the passage of darkness
He is printed in black ink
A mystery that no one can solve
Entry in an unknown face










28.09.2017
Sun :) - A-L Andresen :)
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Malcolm Avatar
October 9, 2017 at 6:55 PM
i love the mystery
Andresen Avatar
October 10, 2017 at 2:34 AM
- Marlon, thank you for your friendly visit and lovely comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Leach Avatar
October 5, 2017 at 3:19 PM
Your poem perfectly describes the scene, but even more intrigue I think I see his face in the picture.
Andresen Avatar
October 6, 2017 at 3:01 AM
- Alesia, thank you for your friendly visit and lovely comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Devnath  Avatar
October 3, 2017 at 1:43 PM
Mystery of your golden ink surely. Loved to read this exceptional poem my lovely dear friend. Loved always, bl
Andresen Avatar
October 6, 2017 at 2:59 AM
- Many thanks for friendly visits and lovely comment, Bl :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Taylor Avatar
October 2, 2017 at 2:10 AM
Sunshine, I really loved this. My kind of poetry!
Andresen Avatar
October 2, 2017 at 4:54 AM
- R.e., thank you for your friendly visit and lovely comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Michelle Avatar
October 2, 2017 at 12:45 AM
I absolutely love the mystery here. Love, Juli-Michelle
Andresen Avatar
October 2, 2017 at 1:06 AM
- Many thanks for your comment, Juli-Michelle :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Onclaud Avatar
October 1, 2017 at 2:43 PM
reminds me of autumn equinox... love the mystery behind this appealing verse, anne... happy huggs
Andresen Avatar
October 1, 2017 at 2:46 PM
- Many thanks for your comment, Nette :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Kendrick Avatar
October 1, 2017 at 2:18 PM
Excellent picture..Your wording aply describes the pic..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara
Andresen Avatar
October 1, 2017 at 2:23 PM
- Sara, thank you for your friendly visit and lovely comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Warrior Avatar
October 1, 2017 at 8:29 AM
He is the shadow man with a faceless face...and I do think he does come from a black hole lol...great mystery Anne-Lise...god bless and (((HUGS)))...^WW^
Andresen Avatar
October 1, 2017 at 2:22 PM
- Who knows where he comes from ... not me :))) - Thank you for your friendly visit and lovely comment, W.W. :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Rees Avatar
October 1, 2017 at 8:22 AM
Don't worry about it - just take the chocolates !
Andresen Avatar
October 1, 2017 at 8:29 AM
.... - Does he have chocolate ? - :))) - Thank you for your friendly visit, Peter - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Smith Avatar
September 30, 2017 at 12:26 PM
Love a good mystery, I wonder...
Andresen Avatar
October 1, 2017 at 8:25 AM
- Many thanks for your comment, Charlie - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Flannery Avatar
September 30, 2017 at 12:23 PM
Very intriguing Anne-Lise your poems are always so well written. Have a wonderful weekend
Andresen Avatar
October 1, 2017 at 8:24 AM
- Thank you for your friendly visit and lovely comment, Vincent :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Onclaud Avatar
September 29, 2017 at 3:58 PM
so thought-provoking you leave me wanting more of this mystery, anne... greeat lines.. happy huggs
Andresen Avatar
September 30, 2017 at 5:57 AM
- Many thanks for your comment, Nette :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Swartz Avatar
September 29, 2017 at 3:51 PM
This is intriguing for sure. Who he is could solve the world's problems. This is great Anne-Lise! Your words describe that painting better than I coitus have every dreamt.
Andresen Avatar
September 30, 2017 at 5:56 AM
- Many thanks for your comment, James - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Williams Avatar
September 29, 2017 at 8:03 AM
Ahhh i love a good mystery Anne-Lise. if you happen to find out the identity of this intriguing stranger, pray do tell....Maria xxx
Williams Avatar
September 29, 2017 at 8:16 AM
Same to you too, and if you're up for a mystery, I've written a second part to my 'Memories'. Be warned its long...Maria xxx
Andresen Avatar
September 29, 2017 at 8:13 AM
- I'll call you, Maria :) - Thank you for your friendly visit and lovely comment :) - Happy weekend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Daniel Avatar
September 29, 2017 at 6:57 AM
Wow, the mystery man, great poem, Anne-lise, and I'm saving the painting, it's really inspirational:)
Andresen Avatar
September 29, 2017 at 7:02 AM
- ... only the painting :))) - Thank you for your friendly visit and lovely comment, Jo :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Gupta Avatar
September 29, 2017 at 6:28 AM
Intriguingly beautiful ...
Andresen Avatar
September 29, 2017 at 7:04 AM
- Many thanks for your comment - Always nice to see you, Probir :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Sivey Avatar
September 29, 2017 at 4:35 AM
The face of a stranger, an unknown man, timeless in his appearance, signifying an absence of knowledge, the reality of who he really is! Like you have said, a mystery is sometimes very fun and exciting at the same time! Sometimes frightening however, but certainly intriguing! I really enjoyed your tremendous poem here this morning my friend! Such a wondrous piece, Great Work!!
Andresen Avatar
September 29, 2017 at 7:03 AM
- Many thanks for your comment, Russell :) - Always nice to see you :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Ashley Avatar
September 28, 2017 at 6:29 PM
Ohh I love this mysterious write Ann-Lise. A very thought provoking write and I love the painting posted as well. Nicely done! :)
Andresen Avatar
September 29, 2017 at 2:52 AM
- Many thanks for your comment, Susan :) - Always nice to see you :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
One Avatar
September 28, 2017 at 4:21 PM
Nothing wrong with a mystery... Deep write.. Maybe he is just a figment of your imagination..
Andresen Avatar
September 29, 2017 at 1:49 AM
- No, nothing wrong with a mystery S.O. :) - Many thanks for your comment - Always nice to see you :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Allison Avatar
September 28, 2017 at 2:39 PM
He remains an enigma and I guess he would never admit where he's from Anne Lise!:-) hugs jan xx
Andresen Avatar
September 28, 2017 at 2:44 PM
- Life or after life on earth ... who knows? ... an exciting thought :) - Many thanks for your comment - Always nice to see you, Jan :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Smith Avatar
September 28, 2017 at 2:25 PM
Mysteries are the wonderment of life to ponder
Andresen Avatar
September 28, 2017 at 2:46 PM
- I love mysteries, Tim :) - Thank you for your friendly visit and lovely comment - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Pandit Avatar
September 28, 2017 at 2:18 PM
I see the black ink on him, Anne-Lise--this sounds like a mystery--face of unknown that comes in the end??
Andresen Avatar
September 28, 2017 at 2:49 PM
- Maybe he does not have a face - Many thanks, Vijay - Always a pleasure to read your comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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