Strange Love

When I look into your eyes I no longer want the usual guys
You make me feel warm like I do right before a storm
I feel like pure gold as you hold me
When you kiss me I feel complete bliss
You give me such a soft touch, nothing too much
I could lay with you for days as we go into a haze
When will this secret love affair become aware to others
You don’t seem to express the same dream as I have 
I know pain and you are driving my brain insane
When will you realize that I truly do care about you
You must think these actions are all lies
I will not accept this rejection, all I wanted was affection
When you go on with your day I hope you know what sorrow you have given me
You will be forgiven but I’ll make sure you feel what I have 
I feel you have torn out my heart now that we are apart

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018



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Date: 4/27/2024 5:57:00 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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Date: 9/23/2018 1:07:00 PM
touches deep...lovely poem
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Date: 9/20/2018 10:01:00 AM
A bittersweet poem... expressed so well..
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Date: 9/12/2018 5:28:00 AM
This was so tender, so truly heart-felt, but when I got to this phrase "secret love affair" I began to get some loud disturbing Uh-oh feelings. I am sad that you know pain, but anyone who is not proud of your love does not deserve it. I truly hope this is in the past, because it ends so sad.
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