Strands

strands of pearls
falling gracefully 
where they may



AP: Honorable Mention 2021

Posted on December 16, 2019

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M. L. Kiser

Date: 12/20/2019 12:01:00 PM

This does have an AHA moment; beautiful.

Line Gauthier
Date: 12/20/2019 12:27:00 PM

Thanks, ML. Most appreciated.

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 12/19/2019 1:52:00 AM

Delicate and delightful. I have never liked pearls, yet, I like them here.

Line Gauthier
Date: 12/19/2019 8:44:00 AM

So funny you should say that. I LOVE pearls they're iridescent and come in so many lovely colors....

Kai Michael Neumann

Date: 12/18/2019 4:38:00 AM

Sometimes we do not have to dive for pearls. If we sit patiently they may appear. Kind wishes, Kai

Line Gauthier
Date: 12/18/2019 8:01:00 AM

Absolutely, Kai. Thanks for your lovely visit and comment.

Jenish Somadas

Date: 12/17/2019 3:36:00 AM

The grace of the pearls are there in the words.. Here pearls are falling from the sky and making puddles around me.. Nice one..

Line Gauthier
Date: 12/17/2019 9:00:00 AM

Thanks for your lovely visit and comment, Jenish. Some pearls we can do without. LOL

Quoth Theraven

Date: 12/16/2019 11:21:00 PM

Line, Love this Haiku in strands of pearls. Let them finish in Fall. -Richard

Line Gauthier
Date: 12/17/2019 12:11:00 AM

Thanks for your visit, Richard. It's interesting to see the different interpretations.

Sandra Adams

Date: 12/16/2019 8:48:00 PM

wonderful line... this makes one ponder some thoughts... :) hugs

Line Gauthier
Date: 12/17/2019 12:11:00 AM

Thanks for your much appreciated visit and comment, Sandra.

Gershon Wolf

Date: 12/16/2019 8:19:00 PM

Reading this immediately prompted a deep sigh. Wonderful thought!! :) gw

Line Gauthier
Date: 12/16/2019 8:25:00 PM

Thank you so much, Gershon. Yet again proving how poetry is a game of give and take between the poet who suggests the image and the reader(/poet) who creates it.