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strands of pearls falling gracefully where they may AP: Honorable Mention 2021 Posted on December 16, 2019

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Date: 12/20/2019 12:01:00 PM
This does have an AHA moment; beautiful.
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Line Gauthier
Date: 12/20/2019 12:27:00 PM
Thanks, ML. Most appreciated.
Date: 12/19/2019 1:52:00 AM
Delicate and delightful. I have never liked pearls, yet, I like them here.
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Date: 12/19/2019 8:44:00 AM
So funny you should say that. I LOVE pearls they're iridescent and come in so many lovely colors....
Date: 12/18/2019 4:38:00 AM
Sometimes we do not have to dive for pearls. If we sit patiently they may appear. Kind wishes, Kai
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Line Gauthier
Date: 12/18/2019 8:01:00 AM
Absolutely, Kai. Thanks for your lovely visit and comment.
Date: 12/17/2019 3:36:00 AM
The grace of the pearls are there in the words.. Here pearls are falling from the sky and making puddles around me.. Nice one..
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Date: 12/17/2019 9:00:00 AM
Thanks for your lovely visit and comment, Jenish. Some pearls we can do without. LOL
Date: 12/16/2019 11:21:00 PM
Line, Love this Haiku in strands of pearls. Let them finish in Fall. -Richard
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Date: 12/17/2019 12:11:00 AM
Thanks for your visit, Richard. It's interesting to see the different interpretations.
Date: 12/16/2019 8:48:00 PM
wonderful line... this makes one ponder some thoughts... :) hugs
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Date: 12/17/2019 12:11:00 AM
Thanks for your much appreciated visit and comment, Sandra.
Date: 12/16/2019 8:19:00 PM
Reading this immediately prompted a deep sigh. Wonderful thought!! :) gw
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Date: 12/16/2019 8:25:00 PM
Thank you so much, Gershon. Yet again proving how poetry is a game of give and take between the poet who suggests the image and the reader(/poet) who creates it.
Date: 12/16/2019 4:15:00 PM
I can picture this, I think. :) Nicely done Line.
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Date: 12/16/2019 4:34:00 PM
Thanks, Chris.
Date: 12/16/2019 3:18:00 PM
A mind boggling poem that makes the mind work :)~
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Line Gauthier
Date: 12/16/2019 4:33:00 PM
Imagination is a muscle that needs a good workout anyway. LOL
Date: 12/16/2019 2:52:00 PM
love it! very intriguing
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Line Gauthier
Date: 12/16/2019 4:29:00 PM
LOL

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