Stranded

You push me away with your
fake smile
fake laugh
superficial words
that pierce through me harder than an "I hate you" would.
So this is what it comes to?
You've got your priorities now,
whether you've got them straight or not,
I'm clearly not one of them. 
Broken smiles.
Broke promises.
Broken friendship.
It's not what you thought it would be-
this new relationship of yours.
You swear this new life is everything you've ever wanted
but I think I've known you long enough
to see the hurt in your eyes. 
I don't know what's causing it.
I wish I could make it go away,
back to the way things used to be.
Wish I could be part of the solution
rather than the problem
But you won't let me.
You've left me here alone.

stranded

And I know,
no matter how many people you surround yourself with,
You are stranded too.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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December 5, 2010 at 7:24 PM
Beautiful poem.I enjoyed all your poems.-kashinath
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December 2, 2010 at 8:01 PM
very strong to the minds thoughts here my friend
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December 2, 2010 at 3:30 AM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Kelly. Wishing you the best in your writing endeavors. You can look to the left side of the main page and find lots of information on PoetrySoup including contests by members of PoetrySoup and contests by the PoetrySoup site also which you as a new member and us oldies also may enter. If you have questions please feel free to ask ANYONE here. We are ALL willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol
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December 1, 2010 at 7:34 PM
Welcome to Poetry Soup.. so enjoyed reading your poetry tonight with its creative theme.. hope your time on the Soup will be fun and filled with sharing.. check out the contests too.. good luck with luv..
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December 1, 2010 at 6:46 PM
Hi Kelly, I'm sorry for your pain and unfortunately I've been there before... Thank you for sharing... Lay
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