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Stranded

You push me away with your fake smile fake laugh superficial words that pierce through me harder than an "I hate you" would. So this is what it comes to? You've got your priorities now, whether you've got them straight or not, I'm clearly not one of them. Broken smiles. Broke promises. Broken friendship. It's not what you thought it would be- this new relationship of yours. You swear this new life is everything you've ever wanted but I think I've known you long enough to see the hurt in your eyes. I don't know what's causing it. I wish I could make it go away, back to the way things used to be. Wish I could be part of the solution rather than the problem But you won't let me. You've left me here alone. stranded And I know, no matter how many people you surround yourself with, You are stranded too.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 12/5/2010 7:24:00 PM
Beautiful poem.I enjoyed all your poems.-kashinath
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Date: 12/2/2010 8:01:00 PM
very strong to the minds thoughts here my friend
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Date: 12/2/2010 3:30:00 AM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Kelly. Wishing you the best in your writing endeavors. You can look to the left side of the main page and find lots of information on PoetrySoup including contests by members of PoetrySoup and contests by the PoetrySoup site also which you as a new member and us oldies also may enter. If you have questions please feel free to ask ANYONE here. We are ALL willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol
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Date: 12/1/2010 7:34:00 PM
Welcome to Poetry Soup.. so enjoyed reading your poetry tonight with its creative theme.. hope your time on the Soup will be fun and filled with sharing.. check out the contests too.. good luck with luv..
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Date: 12/1/2010 6:46:00 PM
Hi Kelly, I'm sorry for your pain and unfortunately I've been there before... Thank you for sharing... Lay
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