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Straight Jacket

falling in love was good, til’ I stopped moving, I’m in a straight jacket 
























Alexis Y.
05/15/2021

love hurtsmonoku

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Gershon Wolf

May 18, 2021 at 8:03 PM

Houdini is called for sometimes. Good one, Alexis. :) gw

Richard Lamoureux

May 18, 2021 at 12:14 PM

Relationships can be challenging. I escaped my first Jacket but have been blissfully married now for 27 years. The right partner makes a world of difference.

Virginia Gelok

May 15, 2021 at 4:23 PM

Houdini did it...my son the magician does...escape ! you just have to have a plan and some support! Excellent ! ( i hope it's not true.

Victor Buhagiar

May 15, 2021 at 1:29 PM

A deep monoku with layers of meanings.

Sotto Poet

May 15, 2021 at 11:33 AM

A monoku with numerous profound implications, dearest Alexis. However, I believe that it's more brilliant if you are in restriction is superior to going completely gaga until you quit moving:) Stay safe and have an incredible evening.