Straight Jacket

falling in love was good, til’ I stopped moving, I’m in a straight jacket Alexis Y. 05/15/2021

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Gershon Wolf

Date: 5/18/2021 8:03:00 PM

Houdini is called for sometimes. Good one, Alexis. :) gw

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 5/18/2021 12:14:00 PM

Relationships can be challenging. I escaped my first Jacket but have been blissfully married now for 27 years. The right partner makes a world of difference.

Virginia Gelok

Date: 5/15/2021 4:23:00 PM

Houdini did it...my son the magician does...escape ! you just have to have a plan and some support! Excellent ! ( i hope it's not true.

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 5/15/2021 1:29:00 PM

A deep monoku with layers of meanings.

Sotto Poet

Date: 5/15/2021 11:33:00 AM

A monoku with numerous profound implications, dearest Alexis. However, I believe that it's more brilliant if you are in restriction is superior to going completely gaga until you quit moving:) Stay safe and have an incredible evening.

Tom Cunningham

Date: 5/15/2021 11:26:00 AM

It sometimes has that effect, been away for a week, just playing catch up. Enjoy your weekend Alexis, hope you're well. Tom