Straight Arrow

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How cool to be directly behind a bird in flight!

pristine-white rudder flapping wings of straight arrow — God’s witness 7/1/2018

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Wendy Nipas

Date: 7/16/2018 5:26:00 PM

I love the imagery in this haiku. Beautiful way to describe a bird in flight.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/16/2018 8:12:00 PM

Thank you, Wendy!

Lyric Man

Date: 7/3/2018 12:34:00 AM

Kim.. I loved reading your poem this evening with a delightful bedtime tea. I look forward to reading more of your creative works tomorrow.. sleep well!

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/3/2018 5:39:00 AM

Thanks so much, Lyric!

Gershon Wolf

Date: 7/2/2018 7:03:00 PM

Bullseye! Direct hit, Kim! :) gw

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/2/2018 7:34:00 PM

God puts these lovely images right in front of me! A wonderful Summer! Drought is long gone! Thriving of nature!

Jan Allison

Date: 7/2/2018 2:35:00 PM

a beauty Kim:-) hugs Jan xx

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/2/2018 2:57:00 PM

Thank you, Jan...hug, Kim