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How cool to be directly behind a bird in flight! 

Straight Arrow

pristine-white rudder
flapping wings of straight arrow
— God’s witness

7/1/2018
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Nipas Avatar
July 16, 2018 at 5:26 PM
I love the imagery in this haiku. Beautiful way to describe a bird in flight.
Rodrigues Avatar
July 16, 2018 at 8:12 PM
Thank you, Wendy!
Man Avatar
July 3, 2018 at 12:34 AM
Kim.. I loved reading your poem this evening with a delightful bedtime tea. I look forward to reading more of your creative works tomorrow.. sleep well!
Rodrigues Avatar
July 3, 2018 at 5:39 AM
Thanks so much, Lyric!
Wolf Avatar
July 2, 2018 at 7:03 PM
Bullseye! Direct hit, Kim! :) gw
Rodrigues Avatar
July 2, 2018 at 7:34 PM
God puts these lovely images right in front of me! A wonderful Summer! Drought is long gone! Thriving of nature!
Allison Avatar
July 2, 2018 at 2:35 PM
a beauty Kim:-) hugs Jan xx
Rodrigues Avatar
July 2, 2018 at 2:57 PM
Thank you, Jan...hug, Kim
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