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Storybook Moon

If someone told you, “Draw the moon
And try to get it right,”
The picture you’d depict would be
What’s hanging there tonight…

The perfect crescent, all a’glow,
Like in a storybook
And it looked less like it was real
With every glance I took.

There aren’t many nights like this
When it is opportune
To behold that classic sliver
Of a fairy tale-type moon.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 11/1/2014 7:45:00 AM
I can only reiterate the two comments already posted. Maybe you'd like to check out my Moonsigner poem. Page 3, #3. Happy moonlighting. Peace. :)
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Date: 10/28/2014 8:16:00 PM
Oh, Yes. The moon has, and will continue to inspire great poetry. Loved it.
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Date: 10/28/2014 5:22:00 AM
absolutely delightful write Ilene I love looking at the moon in its various stages of the cycle each one holds its onw unique beauty:-) hugs jan xx
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