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Story Teller

Tears flow
As the hero
dies slow
in my story

lifeon writing and wordshaiku

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Laura Breidenthal

December 19, 2011 at 1:19 PM

Interesting format and a very heartfelt Haiku! Always, Laura

Maina Ndugo

December 9, 2011 at 1:14 PM

Thank you all for reading my poem

Andrea Dietrich

December 8, 2011 at 11:35 PM

I really like this one, Maina. Congrats on your win.

Kash Poet

December 8, 2011 at 11:33 PM

Good story in 4 lines .Congrats Maina on your win.Enjoyed.

Kim Merryman

December 8, 2011 at 4:31 PM

Congrats on your win, Maina! Kim

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

December 8, 2011 at 1:21 PM

Oh how I can relate to this, Maina! I really like this one.... shucks this is also probably why most of the time I have happier endings to my writes... one can sure get emotionally attached... Super congrats on your win! :D

Natalie The Rogue Rhymer

December 8, 2011 at 12:39 PM

Wowza Maina! And great job 'thinking outside the box' and actually having the hero die! Are you writing a novel (or reading one)? I'm writing my first and am lovin' it!

Maina Ndugo

December 9, 2011 at 1:16 PM

I'd like to read your novel when u finish it