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Tears flow As the hero dies slow in my story

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 12/19/2011 1:19:00 PM
Interesting format and a very heartfelt Haiku! Always, Laura
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Date: 12/9/2011 1:14:00 PM
Thank you all for reading my poem
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Date: 12/8/2011 11:35:00 PM
I really like this one, Maina. Congrats on your win.
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Date: 12/8/2011 11:33:00 PM
Good story in 4 lines .Congrats Maina on your win.Enjoyed.
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Date: 12/8/2011 4:31:00 PM
Congrats on your win, Maina! Kim
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Date: 12/8/2011 1:21:00 PM
Oh how I can relate to this, Maina! I really like this one.... shucks this is also probably why most of the time I have happier endings to my writes... one can sure get emotionally attached... Super congrats on your win! :D
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Date: 12/8/2011 12:39:00 PM
Wowza Maina! And great job 'thinking outside the box' and actually having the hero die! Are you writing a novel (or reading one)? I'm writing my first and am lovin' it!
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Date: 12/9/2011 1:16:00 PM
I'd like to read your novel when u finish it
Date: 12/8/2011 12:25:00 PM
Maina congrats on your win..David
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Date: 12/8/2011 11:06:00 AM
Congratulations on your placement in Cyndi's "Creativity" contest Maina. Love, Carol
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